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WiseWomanWickedTongue's avatar

Love this. It feels like a chaotic work day. Then we feel the awkward pause. Nice!

imarkanx || istvan markan 🍁's avatar

Mondays are so painfulβ€¦πŸ˜€

Lee Summers's avatar

I like how you're playing around with spacing and formatting here. It's really effective on the opening line in particular!

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

That pause may be the most important moment in the poem. Sometimes it’s only when everything stops that we notice we’ve forgotten why we started.

imarkanx || istvan markan 🍁's avatar

Why am I writing poetry? I should be working! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚

Thank you.