poem distilled from a Monday
Love this. It feels like a chaotic work day. Then we feel the awkward pause. Nice!
Mondays are so painfulβ¦π
I like how you're playing around with spacing and formatting here. It's really effective on the opening line in particular!
Thank you. π
That pause may be the most important moment in the poem. Sometimes itβs only when everything stops that we notice weβve forgotten why we started.
Why am I writing poetry? I should be working! ππ
Thank you.
Love this. It feels like a chaotic work day. Then we feel the awkward pause. Nice!
Mondays are so painfulβ¦π
I like how you're playing around with spacing and formatting here. It's really effective on the opening line in particular!
Thank you. π
That pause may be the most important moment in the poem. Sometimes itβs only when everything stops that we notice weβve forgotten why we started.
Why am I writing poetry? I should be working! ππ
Thank you.